Thursday, September 24, 2009

Dialogue

"Stop the car," Jacob ordered.
"Yes sir," the driver replied.
"Get him out of the back. I will be in the office."
"Yes sir," the driver said again as Jacob left. The car door opened. "We're here sweetheart," He smiled at me as he took off my gag. "Don't even think about screaming. This building has been abandoned for years by everyone except the hobos that call it home. And even they won't come down into the garage."
"Why is that?" I asked.
"They think it's haunted. But the screams they heard didn't come from people who were already dead; not yet dead anyway."

This is the dialogue version of a primarily narrated portion of my story Steel Horizons.

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